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A Girlfriend Is..............

Someone to love,
Someone to hug,
Someone to cherish,
Someone to snug,
Someone to care for,
Someone to miss,
Someone to think off,
Someone to dream with,
Someone to scream about,
Someone to spend ur time with,

A Girlfriend is a person i cant live without.
©2008-2009 ~ShepardSoldier
:iconshepardsoldier:

Author's Comments

I came up with this at 1:50am this morning and it took about 1-2 minutes to write down and think off. Im not sure what category this is and this isnt intended poetry its just the way i feel and i rarely show my emotions. Please tell me what u think....

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:iconsilence321:
a cool poem dipper i like your style of writeing,
:) :P

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I'm a stranger i have to get to know
im not who i was so long ago
:iconshepardsoldier:
kl cheers the funny thing is this wasnt intended to be a poem and its also the first thing that i have written in a VERY VERY long time

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I love it when a plan comes together
I'm not a hypocrite, I just expect people to do as I say and not as I do
:iconlittleru:
errrrm... 'cherise'? you mean 'cherish', surely?

Its sweet, Salty. :p didn't have you down as a writer. Its effective with the listing. Its thoughtful.

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soar away, Grey Eyes...
:iconshepardsoldier:
yeah i dont write so im surprised how good this came out and cheers ill change that mistake

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I love it when a plan comes together
I'm not a hypocrite, I just expect people to do as I say and not as I do
:iconprojectzuel:
Repetitive parallel phrasing to get the message across, which is a nice if basic touch. But the message is clear and precise, put forward with rhymes so it gets stuck in the readers mind. A really nice surprise.

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"It's mongoose time!!" (for Halo 3)

Brawl Code: 0259-1741-8750 (MJS)

Pokemon Pearl: 1203 6800 9171 (Marcus) Battles only. No trades.
:iconshepardsoldier:
cheers man

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I love it when a plan comes together
I'm not a hypocrite, I just expect people to do as I say and not as I do
:iconsonicsaturn:
i like it! i like poems with the repetitive feel to it, and i agree with marcus that its a nice surprise from you, you should try more! when you're in the mood for it obviously :)

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Writing for the fun of it
Writing for the emotional release
either way
its till an art :)
:iconshepardsoldier:
its not a matter of when im in the mood its a matter of when im really bored and have mo idea what im doing. lol cheers anyway

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I love it when a plan comes together
I'm not a hypocrite, I just expect people to do as I say and not as I do
:iconsonicsaturn:
exactly, in the mood :P

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Writing for the fun of it
Writing for the emotional release
either way
its till an art :)

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